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Gokento's drastic change
December 22nd, 2015, 4:23 pm

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GokentoPower
Posted by GokentoPower
December 22nd, 2015, 4:23 pm
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...istilliketheoldone...


so yeah, wich one is better, the old one, or this one?

also criticsplz


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Chunck.co
Posted by Chunck.co
December 22nd, 2015, 5:38 pm
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Comic wise i'd say old one,
Game wise i say'd both are fine.



Josephk
Posted by Josephk
December 22nd, 2015, 7:17 pm
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In my opinion.

1) The head looks beautifully crafted. Just like the previous one.

2) I don't see anything on his recolored glove that showed that there was a glove in the first. Which is great!

3) The shirt and pants is suffering the same faith as your previous design.

4) Who puts short socks over their pants?

5) The light source gets more thrown off the lower the body.

Quality wise, Not much different from the previous sprite. And to be honest, I don't really care about how they looked. I only care about how much effort was put into it (Like the shading, the frames, the amount of different poses, etc).

I'm a lazy guy too, and it takes me sometimes 2 months to complete my character's SPRITE SHEET, not Mugen form. But during those times I try to make sure it looks satisfactory to me and the others. Yours look like they were "grabbed, brushed and immediately thrown into my WIP queue" like if you wanted your character playable as soon as possible.
It doesn't work that way.
It slows down the progress rate of every other character in the queue because I am having so much trouble trying to fix that one character. I hate it when the animation looks incredibly bad or when FFC goes all "Yo, 256 color dawg! I can't add another color to the table!?"

What I'm saying is, please don't shove your new character down my throat without bothering to fix its errors. Comparing the head to the clothes really proves it.


Tl:dr
http://i.imgur.com/pIvKZxD.gif



Oh, and btw

Josephk
Posted by Josephk
December 22nd, 2015, 7:32 pm
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Fixing the errors on Gokento's previous sheet is simple enough for me to bother program him again.

Just edit more of Sonic/Shadow/Tails/Whoever's poses (for now), read more spriting tutorials (more specifically clothing tutorial), and better develop your character along the way (Whether new design or old design, I don't really care).



GokentoPower
Posted by GokentoPower
December 23rd, 2015, 6:56 am
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@Josephk: crud, i need to know how to do clothes.

my problem are clothes.


clothes are my problems.

i am good at heads, but still clothes.

do you know any frickin' tutorial on how to do akuma's outfit? since Gokento's future form is supposed to resemble satsui no hado, and since his father is actually akuma, sooo...


anyfrickingtutorialonhowtodoaf*ckingkarateGItogokentoyouknow?



Josephk
Posted by Josephk
December 23rd, 2015, 9:16 am
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@GokentoPower: Oh so you wanted to draw something like this?
http://www.bandyhates.com/photos/uncategorized/2007/07/05/akuma470.gif

Well then try this tutorial on how to draw a simple one:
http://www.smackjeeves.com/images/uploaded/comics/f/1/f176aff54nuV6.png



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